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But I definitely need to keep working on the discipline to cut the occasional scenes that just don't need to be there no matter how much I might really love them!Anne E.G. Nydamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02406524149458743460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2411759600837193508.post-77779706430505207452011-08-11T01:35:52.072-07:002011-08-11T01:35:52.072-07:00I would never be so gauche as to ask how much you ...I would never be so gauche as to ask how much you weigh....but you're worth whatever it is in gold! THANK YOU for another amazingly helpful post.<br /><br />Any chance you could talk me through your top tips for transitions?<br /><br />Thanks again.Adele https://www.blogger.com/profile/07934079397993755487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2411759600837193508.post-45600696721709714312011-08-09T21:50:21.645-07:002011-08-09T21:50:21.645-07:00Sorry if I depressed you, Liz! And my summer is go...Sorry if I depressed you, Liz! And my summer is going swimmingly, thank you for asking!<br /><br />Melissa, I call that stage Polishing. That's where I check for word choice, eliminate echoes, delete any wordiness, etc.<br /><br />So glad the checklist is helpful!R.L. LaFevershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14646274781361864901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2411759600837193508.post-61289297289483534592011-08-08T19:33:23.308-07:002011-08-08T19:33:23.308-07:00Oooh another good one...although I'm not sure ...Oooh another good one...although I'm not sure whether I'm currently micro or macro-ing. I had to cut out a character and do some re-writes for that (that felt macro) but now I've been adding a flashback and strengthening some plot threads. I would have thought of that as macro as well...hmmm.<br /><br />So, if all this "is my scene doing enough" is micro revision, what do you call it when a writer goes through and addresses the language? (what is smaller than micro? Nano revision? ha!) You know, moving a phrase to the front of a sentence, making sure there's not too much duplication of sentence structure or wording...that sort of stuff. <br /><br />Obviously what you call it doesn't matter--this is a great checklist and very very helpful to me where I am right now. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2411759600837193508.post-28883080340253855032011-08-08T11:47:55.124-07:002011-08-08T11:47:55.124-07:00Thanks for this checklist, Robin. It's so tho...Thanks for this checklist, Robin. It's so thorough -- I now have a depressing amount of work to think about. : )<br /><br />Hope your summer is going well!liz michalskihttp://www.lizmichalski.comnoreply@blogger.com